Thursday, 21 November 2013

Thunder Storms

Dark cloud invade the sky bringing terror  among the people. A sudden flash of light fills the sky, seconds later a piercing rumble follows. Moments later an ear piercing rumble fills the sky. Droplets start pelting down  as in a cold shower. As the droplets hits the ground it makes the sound of plastic wrapping being crumpled together. The smell is like the smell of your shower after a hot bath. If you want to go outside you better bring a umbrella because the little raindrops will pelt on you like pins and needles.  After a while the rain lightens slowly until it stops. Sunlight gleams on the huge puddles throughout the day.

1 comment:

  1. This is a lovely piece of writing Thomas; you have used the senses and lots of strong and powerful adjectives to create a vivid description. I enjoyed reading this.
    - make sure you read over carefully - the first sentence for example needs some attention
    - make sure you credit your sources for images your use
    - make sure you tag your posts please

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